One of my happiest memories of my life is going to Canabie Lake Park with my family: me, my mother and my brother. My mother is a nice person because I know that even though she works a lot she still tries to spend time with me. My brother was a nice guy. He was always looking out for me and spending time with me. Sometimes he would get out of hand but I knew he was just playing around.
My mother was driving, and my brother and I were in the backseat. It was very quiet on the way there. It took us at least 3 hours to get there. Then we finally made it and went on a lot of rides and ate some food. I went on a roller coaster- like ride where you get inside a boat like log and it goes down a river and you are splashed by water. And when I did get splashed with water I was scared.
Then for the rest of the day we went on more rides. Then me and my family sat down for a while and relaxed and ate some food. Lastly, we stayed until it got dark and we went home. I had a great day with my family because we don’t get to spend a lot of time together. I loved this trip because I got to spend time with my family.
- Jakiel V., 9th grade @New Bedford Vo-Tech HS

thats the funnest!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI like how you put in how you felt and what you were thimking and stuff like that
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